One day in summer I went to Soak City. I went pacific spin . took myto the wave baby brother pool then I took my baby brother to the wave pool. Then I took my baby brother to the water play ground then I took him to the little slide then me and my sister went to the 10 feet slide .then me and me and my friend went on the big slide. that slide was so big my dad got scared just looking at it. and my baby brother went on the big slide he was not scared then I went to the pacific spin with my dad to get pizza then we went to the wavepool again for the partey in th wave pool at the end of the there was a huge wave it kokked my baby brother down.
Narrative 2
One day when i was five in the summer my dad said let' s go to disney land and i said ok then we got there then we to the hotel then me
and my sister went on the roler coster then i went to the games and won prizies then i saw miney and mickey mousethen they gave me candy then we went back to the hotel and went to sleep in the moring they gave us pancakes tey gave me a pancake with a smile fac then my grandmama came and took me to the disney storeto buy toys.
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Narrative #1
One day in summer I went to Soak City. I went pacific spin . took myto the wave baby brother pool then I took my baby brother to the wave pool. Then I took my baby brother to the water play ground then I took him to the little slide then me and my sister went to the 10 feet slide .then me and me and my friend went on the big slide. that slide was so big my dad got scared just looking at it. and my baby brother went on the big slide he was not scared then I went to the pacific spin with my dad to get pizza then we went to the wavepool again for the partey in th wave pool at the end of the there was a huge wave it kokked my baby brother down.
Narrative 2
One day when i was five in the summer my dad said let' s go to disney land and i said ok then we got there then we to the hotel then meand my sister went on the roler coster then i went to the games and won prizies then i saw miney and mickey mousethen they gave me candy then we went back to the hotel and went to sleep in the moring they gave us pancakes tey gave me a pancake with a smile fac then my grandmama came and took me to the disney storeto buy toys.
THE END